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| Rédac anglais | 2 | 28/02/08 à 22:14 |
Bonjour,
est-ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger ma rédaction anglais ? SVP !!!
Je devais inventer l'histoire d'un homme dans l'avion et je devais utiliser les temps du passé, c'est à dire Simple Past et Past Continuous. Donc je suis pas sûr si je les ai bien utilisé...
Merci d'avance.
Paul is a businessman. He’s sixty. He went to New York because he had an important conference. The first class was full and he had to go to economic class. He ate too much and e wanted to go toilet but he didn’t know where it is. He asked hostess. When he got up, he tripped over an old lady. She was shocking, was beating off and he was falling. He couldn’t move because his spine was breaking. He needed to help so a hostess was arriving. She tried to carry him but he was too big so five men were coming to help his. They carried him and were helping him to sit down. He hurt so much that he asked a sleeping pill. When the plane landed, the ambulance arrived quickly and he went to hospital.
| Rédac anglais | 1/2 | 29/02/2008 à 11:17 |
| Rédac anglais | 2/2 | 29/02/2008 à 11:34 |