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kAoRu974 DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 9 08/03/06 à 08:31

Donc voila, j'aurais besoin d'aide pour ce sujet d'anglais svp ='(

Je suis vraiment nul et ce devoir a quand coeff 3 dans la moyenne d'anglais !!

C'est une étude de texte

Texte : Extrait de "The pedestrian"

The street was silent and long and empty, with only his shadow moving like the shadow of a hawk in midcountry. If he closed his eyes and stood very still, frozen, he could imagine himself upon the center of a plain, a wintry, windless Arizona desert with no house in a thousand miles, and only dry river beds, the streets, for company.
"What is it now?" he asked the houses, noticing his wrist watch. "Eight-thirty P.M.? Time for a dozen assorted murders? A quiz? A revue? A comedian falling off the stage?"
Was that a murmur of laughter from within a moon-white house? He hesitated, but went on when nothing more happened. He stumbled over a particularly uneven section of sidewalk. The cement was vanishing under flowers and grass. In ten years of walking by night or day, for thousands of miles, he had never met another person walking, not once in all that time.
He came to a cloverleaf intersection which stood silent where two main highways crossed the town. During the day it was a thunderous surge of cars, the gas stations open, a great insect rustling and a ceaseless jockeying for position as the scarab-beetles, a faint incense puttering from their exhausts, skimmed homeward to the far directions. But now these highways, too, were like streams in a dry season, all stone and bed and moon radiance.

Questions :

Paragraphe 1:
1. What atmosphere is conveyed in this paragraph? Justify by quoting keywords.

2. What images does the narrator use to refer to :
-the main character : ...
-the city : ...
-the streets : ...

3. Why are these images particulary powerful?


Paragraphe 2:
4. What is the main character talking to?

5. Who is he actually talking to?

6. Where is everybody? How can the reader guess?


Paragraphe 3:
7. What made the man hesitate? Why?

8. What new element is given about the man's environnement in this paragraph?

9. What are the visible consequences of this on the streets?


Paragraphe 4:
10. What is the main différene between the highways at night and in the daytime?

11. What are the highways compared to :
-at night : ...
-in the daytime : ...


About the whole passage
12. What do we learn about the main character?

13. Who is the narrator?

DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 1/9 08/03/2006 à 08:32
.... tu demande qu'on te fasse tous !!!!
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 2/9 08/03/2006 à 08:32
Dans entraide scolaire ya des limites.
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 3/9 08/03/2006 à 08:33
Et voila mes réponses (je n'ai pas réussi a répondre a la 12 et 13, jy arrive pas ='()

Bref jaimerais saoir si ce que j'ai mis est bon et occasionnellement me donner les réponses du 12 et 13 parceque j'y arrie vraiment pas.

1. In this paragraph, there are mysterious atmosphere ("the street was silent and long and empty", "his shadow morning like the shadow of a hawk") and an atmosphere of trip because the narrator speach about the center of a plain, the Arizona desert, the river that are elements of a plain, the Arizona desert, the rier that are elements of the imagination.

2. -main character : The narrator compares the main character with the shadow of a hawk.
-city : the center of a plain or the Arizona desert.
-the streets : the river

3. The narrator wants to describe the solitude. Indeed these images are particularity powerful because they are elements of the nature and symbolize freedom, the trip, the escape and the solitude.

4. The main character is talking alone.

5. He is talking with the houses.

6. Everybody is in the street. The reader guess that the man speak with the houses and is crazy.

7. The man hesitated to go on the home because he bilieved hear a murmur of laughter.

8. In the paragraph, we learn that the man is on the sidewalk and that he walks since ten years without met another people.

9. The consequences are that how no peoples walk on the streets, the flowers and guess conceal the ciment.

10. In the daytime, there are a lot of car who cross the highways and the gas stations are open. But at night, the highways are empty. The narrator compares the highways with streams in a dry season.

11. -at night : streams in a dry season.
-in the daytime : thunderous surge of car.

12. (Je n'ai pas trouvé...)

13. Ray Bradbury (?) (pas sur du tout)
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 4/9 08/03/2006 à 08:35
Sunline si tu ne te sens pas prète a aider je ne toblige pas a rester (donc va t'en ^^).

Je voudrais juste une correction de ce que j'ai fait alors je te demanderais de garder tes jugements trop hatif pour toi =) Merci ^^
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 5/9 08/03/2006 à 08:39
Je suis un mec pour ton information Wink
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 6/9 08/03/2006 à 09:02
Un mec, et sa change quoi? =) pff..
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 7/9 08/03/2006 à 09:03
Sunline si tu ne te sens pas prète
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 8/9 08/03/2006 à 21:59
oulalala , c pas le sujet du topic, c'est pas grave,; que tu sois un mec , ou une fille, si ca t'interesse pas, t pa obligé de resté (o masculin)
DM d'anglais correction svp ='( 9/9 08/03/2006 à 22:16
pas obligé de rester ( à l'infinitif ) Sifflote
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