Voyage USA

D&C

Voyage USA

11

29/01/12 à 13:36

Bonjour,
Mon lycée organise un voyage en Californie auquel je participe. Je dois remplir un formulaire et répondre à diverses questions. Les rubriques ne sont pas grandes, c'est pourquoi une ou deux phrases suffisent. J'ai fait le travail, mais mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas parfait.
Pouvez-vous le corriger quelques erreurs ? Merci d'avance.


What do you like to do in your spare time?
During my spare time I like to cook with my mother and to spend time with my friends. We listen music, play videogames and watch movies.

Why do you want to live with a host family?
I want to live with a host family because I want to build relationships with new people. I think it is a unique and benefic experience.

What do you expect to learn during your visit and your stay with your Host Family?
I expect to learn a new culture and a different way of life with my host family. I want to discover new citys and landscapes.

What can you share with your Host Family with your life in France ?
I want to share the french culture with them. For example, as i like to cook, i want to share french food with them.

J'ai également une lettre de motivation à rédiger, cependant je en sais pas vraiment quoi y mettre dedans. Si vous avez des idées pour m'aider, elles sont les bienvenues !

Voyage USA

2/11

29/01/2012 à 13:46

Je crois que c'est bien A unique chance, à cause de la sonorité, de la phonétique et tout ça, mais j'suis pas sûre.

Sinon, dans la première question : "we listen TO music"
3ème question : cities et pas citys

Voilà, je crois que c'est tout, c'est pas grand chose !

D&C  

Voyage USA

5/11

29/01/2012 à 14:17

Putain t'as un bon lycée toi ! nous c'est juste des voyages a la con en Espagne , tu verra c'est plutot sympa la Californie (sauf SF et les coins perdus vers Sacramento )

Voyage USA

6/11

29/01/2012 à 14:38

What do you like to do in your spare time?
During my spare time I like to cook (I like cooking est plus fréquent) with my mother and to spend (spending) time with my friends. We listen TO music, play videogames and watch movies.

Why do you want to live with a host family?
I want to live with a host family because I want to build relationships with new people. I think it is a unique and benefic experience. (tu as raison, et pas AN unique comme je l'ai lu plus haut)

What do you expect to learn during your visit and your stay with your Host Family?
I expect to learn a new culture and a different way of life with my host family. I want to discover new cities and landscapes.

What can you share with your Host Family with your life in France ?
I want to share the french culture with them. For example, as I like cooking, i want to share french food with them.


Envoie moi un MP si tu as besoin d'aide

D&C  

Voyage USA

7/11

29/01/2012 à 14:43

Merci !

D&C  

Voyage USA

11/11

29/01/2012 à 19:09

Merci à tous !